李[A]

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About Me

Hey! I'm A. (figure out the rest of the letters :P). Anyways, I'm a sixteen year old boy who normally doesn't write that much, but hey, I'm practicing vocabulary and writing skills at once so why not :).

I'm overly obsessive with practicing lots of skills and hobbies and stuff. So if you have any questions about me, etc. feel free to send me a message!


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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank's so much for the review! :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Lol thanks for the comment! So happy you like my work and you really should post more cause I just love your work! :P

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Hey, thanks for your honest and length review, it definitely helped put things in perspective.
The foreign names were used really to try and separate it from what people know and expect from modern day warfare, normally from the perspective of English/Americans. I do happen to like the name Zhuge and while I normally do use names based on meaning, I didn't with Zhuge (but looks like I lucked out a bit :D)
Again, Lo was a random name choice in the moment, possible with Luo in the back of my mind. I wanted something short and sweet.
The mass amount of plot was to set it up for Honourfish who wanted the first chapter to set up the story which he could build on from. I kind of felt there was a slight lack in description myself, but I didn't want to make the chapters too lengthy...depending on what HF puts in his chapter I may go back and add some more description.
I think that's everything, but do keep asking questions and do keep sending me stuff too :) Always look forward to your reviews.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


thank you for the review :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks so much for the amazing and helpful review! Can't wait to read your new poem! :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you once again for another brilliant and in depth review :) Will definitely return the favour later today (I would now if I wasn't off out)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


glad you mentioned that! i read your recommended writing and i just wanted to say that i want you to finish it ASAP, i want to finish reading it!

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Posted 6 Years Ago


thanks for the review A. i hope you like the up coming items on my to-do list!

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Posted 6 Years Ago


I enjoyed your poem Forbidden Dream, very strong poem I thought.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


I'm no published author myself :P I am just one man's opinion, other people may adore the way you've written the piece so far :)
I do enjoy reading your work though, you have a wide and varied range of topics to write about, really interesting :)