Artūrs Lūsis

Artūrs Lūsis

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Aberdeen, the Spooky Silver Granite Town of Far North, Aberdeenshire, Grampian, Scotland, United Kingdom
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About Me

http://www.authorsden.com/arturslusis

some years a poet, way more years male
human individuality in the same usual trouble
we people love to experience day after day
published here & there, been here & there
(somehow managing to end up in the UK)
yet somehow always feeling like standing
on the same spot for eons of eating dust
having colds & drinking way too much
cheap wine red or white & being unsatisfied
of course for not doing all those pretty little
and pretty big things I wanted to start doing
do & finish immaculately; bye-bye brain-birdy
writing and writing, both literally & figuratively
a poet, a student, a jobless big-town-yokel

to make this even more conventional:

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© Kings of Leon - ...In This Spooky Town...

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©Marilyn Manson - ...Abuse You...

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© Eurythmics/ Annie Lennox - ...seven seas...


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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. :)
I have been writing short scenes, and they might seem unfinished to a lot of people, but I write until I'm satisfied, and then I stop.
The character of the MC though... I wanted him to seem apathetic and tired at first, but then perform an unexpected act of kindness. I don't know if it worked- I'll look at it in a bit. As I said, I haven't edited it.
Thanks again-

Coral

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Posted 7 Years Ago


hey, you're welcome - i hope my suggestion won't severly effect the poem; it's there, well, just in case if you see what i saw as fitting ;)

cheers! (how they say here - allll the time!)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for the review. :)

-Coral-