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I want you to create something abstract, something surreal, something that makes me think! [more] Add me, but tell me about it first so I can avoid you if needs be The Love Song Of J Albert Prufock Sio credesse che mia risposta fosse A persona che mai tornasse al mondo, Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse. Ma perciocche giammai di questo fondo Non torno vivo alcun, siodo il vero, Senza tema dinfamia ti rispondo. LET us go then, you and I, When the evening is spread out against the sky Like a patient etherised upon a table; Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets, The muttering retreats 5 Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells: Streets that follow like a tedious argument Of insidious intent To lead you to an overwhelming question 10 Oh, do not ask, What is it? Let us go and make our visit. In the room the women come and go Talking of Michelangelo. The yellow fog that rubs its back upon the window-panes, 15 The yellow smoke that rubs its muzzle on the window-panes Licked its tongue into the corners of the evening, Lingered upon the pools that stand in drains, Let fall upon its back the soot that falls from chimneys, Slipped by the terrace, made a sudden leap, 20 And seeing that it was a soft October night, Curled once about the house, and fell asleep. And indeed there will be time For the yellow smoke that slides along the street, Rubbing its back upon the window-panes; 25 There will be time, there will be time To prepare a face to meet the faces that you meet; There will be time to murder and create, And time for all the works and days of hands That lift and drop a question on your plate; 30 Time for you and time for me, And time yet for a hundred indecisions, And for a hundred visions and revisions, Before the taking of a toast and tea. In the room the women come and go 35 Talking of Michelangelo. And indeed there will be time To wonder, Do I dare? and, Do I dare? Time to turn back and descend the stair, With a bald spot in the middle of my hair 40 [They will say: How his hair is growing thin!] My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin, My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin [They will say: But how his arms and legs are thin!] Do I dare 45 Disturb the universe? In a minute there is time For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse. For I have known them all already, known them all: Have known the evenings, mornings, afternoons, 50 I have measured out my life with coffee spoons; I know the voices dying with a dying fall Beneath the music from a farther room. So how should I presume? And I have known the eyes already, known them all 55 The eyes that fix you in a formulated phrase, And when I am formulated, sprawling on a pin, When I am pinned and wriggling on the wall, Then how should I begin To spit out all the butt-ends of my days and ways? 60 And how should I presume? And I have known the arms already, known them all Arms that are braceleted and white and bare [But in the lamplight, downed with light brown hair!] It is perfume from a dress 65 That makes me so digress? Arms that lie along a table, or wrap about a shawl. And should I then presume? And how should I begin? . . . . . Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets 70 And watched the smoke that rises from the pipes Of lonely men in shirt-sleeves, leaning out of windows? I should have been a pair of ragged claws Scuttling across the floors of silent seas. . . . . . And the afternoon, the evening, sleeps so peacefully! 75 Smoothed by long fingers, Asleep tired or it malingers, Stretched on the floor, here beside you and me. Should I, after tea and cakes and ices, Have the strength to force the moment to its crisis? 80 But though I have wept and fasted, wept and prayed, Though I have seen my head [grown slightly bald] brought in upon a platter, I am no prophetand heres no great matter; I have seen the moment of my greatness flicker, And I have seen the eternal Footman hold my coat, and snicker, 85 And in short, I was afraid. And would it have been worth it, after all, After the cups, the marmalade, the tea, Among the porcelain, among some talk of you and me, Would it have been worth while, 90 To have bitten off the matter with a smile, To have squeezed the universe into a ball To roll it toward some overwhelming question, To say: I am Lazarus, come from the dead, Come back to tell you all, I shall tell you all 95 If one, settling a pillow by her head, Should say: That is not what I meant at all. That is not it, at all. And would it have been worth it, after all, Would it have been worth while, 100 After the sunsets and the dooryards and the sprinkled streets, After the novels, after the teacups, after the skirts that trail along the floor And this, and so much more? It is impossible to say just what I mean! But as if a magic lantern threw the nerves in patterns on a screen: 105 Would it have been worth while If one, settling a pillow or throwing off a shawl, And turning toward the window, should say: That is not it at all, That is not what I meant, at all. . . . . . 110 No! I am not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be; Am an attendant lord, one that will do To swell a progress, start a scene or two, Advise the prince; no doubt, an easy tool, Deferential, glad to be of use, 115 Politic, cautious, and meticulous; Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse; At times, indeed, almost ridiculous Almost, at times, the Fool. I grow old I grow old 120 I shall wear the bottoms of my trousers rolled. Shall I part my hair behind? Do I dare to eat a peach? I shall wear white flannel trousers, and walk upon the beach. I have heard the mermaids singing, each to each. I do not think that they will sing to me. 125 I have seen them riding seaward on the waves Combing the white hair of the waves blown back When the wind blows the water white and black. We have lingered in the chambers of the sea By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown 130 Till human voices wake us, and we drown. T S Eliot And because Love battles And because love battles not only in its burning agricultures but also in the mouth of men and women, I will finish off by taking the path away to those who between my chest and your fragrance want to interpose their obscure plant. About me, nothing worse they will tell you, my love, than what I told you. I lived in the prairies before I got to know you and I did not wait love but I was laying in wait for and I jumped on the rose. What more can they tell you? I am neither good nor bad but a man, and they will then associate the danger of my life, which you know and which with your passion you shared. And good, this danger is danger of love, of complete love for all life, for all lives, and if this love brings us the death and the prisons, I am sure that your big eyes, as when I kiss them, will then close with pride, into double pride, love, with your pride and my pride. But to my ears they will come before to wear down the tour of the sweet and hard love which binds us, and they will say: The one you love, is not a woman for you, Why do you love her? I think you could find one more beautiful, more serious, more deep, more other, you understand me, look how shes light, and what a head she has, and look at how she dresses, and etcetera and etcetera. And I in these lines say: Like this I want you, love, love, Like this I love you, as you dress and how your hair lifts up and how your mouth smiles, light as the water of the spring upon the pure stones, Like this I love you, beloved. To bread I do not ask to teach me but only not to lack during every day of life. I dont know anything about light, from where it comes nor where it goes, I only want the light to light up, I do not ask to the night explanations, I wait for it and it envelops me, And so you, bread and light And shadow are. You came to my life with what you were bringing, made of light and bread and shadow I expected you, and Like this I need you, Like this I love you, and to those who want to hear tomorrow that which I will not tell them, let them read it here, and let them back off today because it is early for these arguments. Tomorrow we will only give them a leaf of the tree of our love, a leaf which will fall on the earth like if it had been made by our lips like a kiss which falls from our invincible heights to show the fire and the tenderness of a true love. Pablo Neruda People are like stained-glass windows. They sparkle and shine when the sun is out, but when the darkness sets in, their true beauty is revealed only if there is a light from within. Elisabeth Kubler-Ross, smart woman, I totally agree with this and it's how I now look at people You know your self obsessed when your sitting on your own on a bus, and looking into the window you think the worlds most desirable guy sits down beside you, but then you realize, "Fuck thats me!" I poured my heart out on her face, she was raging and sticky but thats another story "The hottest love has the coldest end." Socrates http://en.netlog.com/clan/Writers_Circle If you like poetry and think you might like to share ideas or post "Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation." Kahil Gibran As long as we have memories, yesterday remains, as long as we have hope, tomorrow awaits, as long as we have love, today is beautiful. Ahh my right arm plastered in nicotine patches, I might just start again being able to use my lungs properly, incredibly freaky feeling [wacko] Drunken Mini golf for the next Olympics along with Extreme Dodge ball and Freedom for Tibet (You heard me free Tibet) I Pride Myself On Being A Devoted Say Anything Fan! I write shit poetry check it out sometime, me and that McGonigal guy vying for the Worst poet ever Crown Its All Over Now Baby Blue ! I smoke Like A Train, But My Lung Cancer well Thats Down to the Big Industrialists, The Bastards My profile screams " Big Headed Dickhead" and I totally agree If your gonna take my msn addy tell me ! Good Old Vainity! Silly Posers! Watch out Pennywise the clown is behind you Arghghhhhh! "To jealousy, nothing is more frightful than laughter." Francoise Sagan You know its hard being a full time wanker not that id know im very nice ! The Danish word for condom is svangerskabsforebyggendemiddel. Its a God Awful Small Affair to the girl with the mousy hair ! "I may be a bastard but im not a fucking bastard" what a genius line from dusk till dawn I LOVE ME YES ! I LOVE ME ! Ziggy played guitar jamming good with wierd and gilly the spiders from mars ! Lo! Death has reared himself a throne The City In The Sea- Edgar Allan Poe Lo! Death has reared himself a throne In a strange city lying alone Far down within the dim West, Where the good and the bad and the worst and the best Have gone to their eternal rest. There shrines and palaces and towers (Time-eaten towers that tremble not!) Resemble nothing that is ours. Around, by lifting winds forgot, Resignedly beneath the sky The melancholy waters lie. No rays from the holy heaven come down On the long night-time of that town; But light from out the lurid sea Streams up the turrets silently Gleams up the pinnacles far and free Up domes up spires up kingly halls Up fanes up Babylon-like walls Up shadowy long-forgotten bowers Of sculptured ivy and stone flowers Up many and many a marvelous shrine Whose wreathd friezes intertwine The viol, the violet, and the vine. So blend the turrets and shadows there That all seem pendulous in the air, While from a proud tower in the town Death looks gigantically down. There open fanes and gaping graves Yawn level with the luminous waves; But not the riches there that lie In each idol's diamond eye Not the gaily-jeweled dead Tempt the waters from their bed; For no ripples curl, alas! Along that wilderness of glass No swellings tell that winds may be Upon some far-off happier sea No heavings hint that winds have been On seas less hideously serene. But lo, a stir is in the air! The wave there is a movement there! As if the towers had thrust aside, In slightly sinking, the dull tide As if their tops had feebly given A void within the filmy Heaven. The waves have now a redder glow The hours are breathing faint and low And when, amid no earthly moans, Down, down that town shall settle hence, Hell, rising from a thousand thrones, Shall do it reverence. ### Robert Frost A winter garden in an alder swamp, Where conies now come out to sun and romp, As near a paradise as it can be And not melt snow or start a dormant tree. It lifts existence on a plane of snow One level higher than the earth below, One level nearer heaven overhead, And last year's berries shining scarlet red. It lifts a gaunt luxuriating beast Where he can stretch and hold his highest feat On some wild apple tree's young tender bark, What well may prove the year's high girdle mark. So near to paradise all pairing ends: Here loveless birds now flock as winter friends, Content with bud-inspecting. They presume To say which buds are leaf and which are bloom. A feather-hammer gives a double knock. This Eden day is done at two o'clock. An hour of winter day might seem too short To make it worth life's while to wake and sport. No one actually reads these about me things so woo im perfectly able to say anything i want ! first sign of madness hairs on the palms of your hands GIVE ME BIG LADIES ANYDAY OHH YEA FAT BOTTOMED GIRLS DO MAkE THIS ROCKIN WORLD GO ROUND Get ready for the worst dressed World Cup in history Yes! I mean the rugby world cup lots of fat ugly men in skin tight stripey lined meshed with lacy stockings (well no but sure) ill be supporting ireland we're gonna look like iuno its just so horrible It's Alright Ma! (I'm Only Bleeding) Bob Dylan Darkness at the break of noon Shadows even the silver spoon The handmade blade, the child's balloon Eclipses both the sun and moon To understand you know too soon There is no sense in trying. Pointed threats, they bluff with scorn Suicide remarks are torn From the fool's gold mouthpiece The hollow horn plays wasted words Proves to warn That he not busy being born Is busy dying. Temptation's page flies out the door You follow, find yourself at war Watch waterfalls of pity roar You feel to moan but unlike before You discover That you'd just be One more person crying. So don't fear if you hear A foreign sound to your ear It's alright, Ma, I'm only sighing. As some warn victory, some downfall Private reasons great or small Can be seen in the eyes of those that call To make all that should be killed to crawl While others say don't hate nothing at all Except hatred. Disillusioned words like bullets bark As human gods aim for their mark Made everything from toy guns that spark To flesh-colored Christs that glow in the dark It's easy to see without looking too far That not much Is really sacred. While preachers preach of evil fates Teachers teach that knowledge waits Can lead to hundred-dollar plates Goodness hides behind its gates But even the president of the United States Sometimes must have To stand naked. An' though the rules of the road have been lodged It's only people's games that you got to dodge And it's alright, Ma, I can make it. Advertising signs that con you Into thinking you're the one That can do what's never been done That can win what's never been won Meantime life outside goes on All around you. You lose yourself, you reappear You suddenly find you got nothing to fear Alone you stand with nobody near When a trembling distant voice, unclear Startles your sleeping ears to hear That somebody thinks They really found you. A question in your nerves is lit Yet you know there is no answer fit to satisfy Insure you not to quit To keep it in your mind and not fergit That it is not he or she or them or it That you belong to. Although the masters make the rules For the wise men and the fools I got nothing, Ma, to live up to. For them that must obey authority That they do not respect in any degree Who despise their jobs, their destinies Speak jealously of them that are free Cultivate their flowers to be Nothing more than something They invest in. While some on principles baptized To strict party platform ties Social clubs in drag disguise Outsiders they can freely criticize Tell nothing except who to idolize And then say God bless him. While one who sings with his tongue on fire Gargles in the rat race choir Bent out of shape from society's pliers Cares not to come up any higher But rather get you down in the hole That he's in. But I mean no harm nor put fault On anyone that lives in a vault But it's alright, Ma, if I can't please him. Old lady judges watch people in pairs Limited in sex, they dare To push fake morals, insult and stare While money doesn't talk, it swears Obscenity, who really cares Propaganda, all is phony. While them that defend what they cannot see With a killer's pride, security It blows the minds most bitterly For them that think death's honesty Won't fall upon them naturally Life sometimes Must get lonely. My eyes collide head-on with stuffed graveyards False gods, I scuff At pettiness which plays so rough Walk upside-down inside handcuffs Kick my legs to crash it off Say okay, I have had enough What else can you show me? And if my thought-dreams could be seen They'd probably put my head in a guillotine But it's alright, Ma, it's life, and life only. Tis All Gravy ! "You God Damn Kids had best be gracious with the munch money you spend cuz for you i wont ever have rough sex with Molly Conolly again" LOVE mE WITH FOOD ! oh that deaf dum and blind kid sure plays a mean pinball ! *guitar riff* everyman has a molly wow wheres mine ? ive noticed that most people on this are alll very similar and it comes in a few camps first we have the dudes and dudettes who like to take headless pics of their torsos and boobalons and what not, who go looking for cam fun! then you have the people who love music and have devoted their life to it and friends and seem to have endless pics of themselves from the sky! And finally ou have the kids that hate everything and go on endless rants about anything. Im not saying im any different nor do I say that im Mr Orginal but still a bit different never happened! I believe that my wrist has started to weep ! Once more unto the breach, dear friends, once more, Or close the wall up with our English dead! In peace there's nothing so becomes a man As modest stillness and humility; But when the blast of war blows in our ears, Then imitate the action of the tiger: Stiffen the sinews, summon up the blood. Be orginal please I know im like amazingly goodlooking joke btw what happened to all the red headed ladies If I was female I'd have more page views proven fact tits help ! Im a real boy i think ______________________ if you can only get this far tut tut tonight we dine in hell yes hell i hear the soup is good WHAT CAN I SAY IM IRISH SO YEA I ROCK YOUR SOCKS PEOPLE KEEP YOUR CLOTHES ON YOUR GONNA GET THE COLD IF YOU DONT ! SUPER GEEK ! second sign of madness looking for the hairs on the palm of your hands kids ! remember sex is not the answer tis only the question the answer is yes sorry but I chose to the right not to reply if you appear to be obnoxius or if you seem to be hitting on me when your like twelve ! My msn for those who ask its bloody well here : metric-figure-2009@live.com and please talk if you add not the " HI HWS YOU THEN SILENCE" its boring and ill most likely block you well yea this is my second profile but i couldnt get anymore pics of myself on so i thought yea lets get another one so if ya wana know anymore just ask oh or see my other profile twill do ya no harm i think http://en.facebox.com/member_of_the_addams_family oh and if you take my msn from either profile please tell me it means i wont have to be rudxe when im asking who the fuck are you :D oh and well done if you've read all of this rather than looking at the pics first your obviously not shallow :P im how real design works see for yourself what a line [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] [huh] ______________________________ if you got to here not bad not bad if you walk away ill walk away first tell me which road you will take, i dont want to risk our paths crossing someday so you walk that way i walk this way and the future hangs over our heads and it moves with each current event until it falls all around like a cold steady rain just stay in when its lookin this way and the moons layin low in the sky forcin everything metal to shine and the sidewalk holds diamonds like a jewelry store case they argue walk this way, no walk this way and lauras asleep on my bed as im leaving she wakes up and says i dreamed you were carried away on the crest of a wave baby dont go away "uh come here" and theres kids playin guns in the streets ones pointin his tree-branch at me so i put my hands up and say enough is enough if you walk away, ill walk away and he shot me dead i found a liquid cure for my landlocked blues they will pass away like a slow parade its leavin but i dont know how soon and the worlds got me dizzy again youd think after twenty-two years id be used to the spin and it only feels worse when i stay in one place so i am always pacin or walkin away and im drinkin the ink from my pen and im balancin history book up on my head and it all boils down to one quotable phrase if you love something, give it away a good woman would pick you apart a box full of suggestions for a possible heart and you might be offended, you might be afraid but dont walk away, dont walk away we made love on the livin room floor with the noise in the background from a televised war and in that deafening pleasure i thought i heard someone say if we walk away, theyll walk away But greed is a bottomless pit And our freedom's a joke we're just taking a piss And the whole world must watch the sad comic display If you're still free start runnin' away 'cause we're comin' for ya! I've grown tired of holding this pose I feel more like a stranger each time I come home So I'm making a deal with the devils of fame Sayin' let me walk away, please You'll be free child once you have died from the shackles of language and measurable time And then we can trade places, play musical graves till then walk away walk away walk away walk away So I'm up at dawn, putting on my shoes I just want to make a clean escape I'm leaving but I don't know where to I know I'm leaving but I don't know where to good old bright eyes _________________________________ if you got here your good 1. Half a league, half a league, Half a league onward, All in the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. "Forward, the Light Brigade! "Charge for the guns!" he said: Into the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. 2. "Forward, the Light Brigade!" Was there a man dismay'd? Not tho' the soldier knew Someone had blunder'd: Their's not to make reply, Their's not to reason why, Their's but to do and die: Into the valley of Death Rode the six hundred. 3. Cannon to right of them, Cannon to left of them, Cannon in front of them Volley'd and thunder'd; Storm'd at with shot and shell, Boldly they rode and well, Into the jaws of Death, Into the mouth of Hell Rode the six hundred. 4. Flash'd all their sabres bare, Flash'd as they turn'd in air, Sabring the gunners there, Charging an army, while All the world wonder'd: Plunged in the battery-smoke Right thro' the line they broke; Cossack and Russian Reel'd from the sabre stroke Shatter'd and sunder'd. Then they rode back, but not Not the six hundred. 5. Cannon to right of them, Cannon to left of them, Cannon behind them Volley'd and thunder'd; Storm'd at with shot and shell, While horse and hero fell, They that had fought so well Came thro' the jaws of Death Back from the mouth of Hell, All that was left of them, Left of six hundred. 6. When can their glory fade? O the wild charge they made! All the world wondered. Honor the charge they made, Honor the Light Brigade, Noble six hundred. The last enemy that shall be destroyed is death" 1 Corinthians 15:26 wit beyond measure is a man's greatest treasure :P "Alive With The Glory Of Love" "Say Anything" When I watch you, I wanna do you right where you're standing (yeah) Right on the foyer, on this dark day, right in plain view (oh yeah) Of the whole ghetto. The boots stomp meadows, but we ignore that (yeah) You're lovely, baby. This war is crazy. I won't let you down (Oh no no) No, I won't let them take you, won't let them take you Hell no no, oh no, I won't let them take you, won't let them take you Hell no no. No, oh no no no! And when our city, vast and shitty, falls to the axis (yeah) They'll search the buildings, collect gold fillings, wallets and rings (oh yeah) But Ms. Black Eyeliner, you'd look finer with each day in hiding (oh yeah) Beneath the wormwood, oooh, love me so good. They won't hear us screw away the day. I'll make you say: (Alive! Alive! Alive with love, alive with love tonight) No, I won't let them take you, won't let them take you Hell no no, oh no, I won't let them take you, won't let them take you Hell no no. Our Treblinka is alive with the glory of love! Treblinka, alive, with the glory of love, yeah! Should they catch us and dispatch us to those separate work camps, I'll dream about you. I will not doubt you with the passing of time (oh yeah) Should they kill me, your love will fill me, as warm as the bullets (yeah) I'll know my purpose. This war was worth this. I won't let you down. No, I won't No, I won't No, I won't (Alive! Alive!) (Alive with love, alive with love tonight) Hell no no, oh no (Alive! Alive!) I won't let them take you, won't let them take you (Alive with love, alive with love tonight) Hell no, no No, no fuck i love Say Anything ______________________________________________ if youve gotten the end i must say weell done your very good Comments
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