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Glacier Glacier

A Poem by Anon
Persimmon Persimmon

A Poem by Anon
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About Me

I'm keen on music, as it's the closest to religion I get. I play trumpet & guitar, like a gentle fool. I love reading poetry, especially plath, c.k.williams, lorca, hall, etc etc. My poetry library grows by the bucketful.


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Posted 16 Years Ago


ok i edited the review sorry

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Posted 16 Years Ago


LOL

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Posted 16 Years Ago


oh s**t, Sean sent me it! Sorry

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Hi Cynthia,
I made a couple of changes as you suggested, thank you so much for helping make my Poem a bit better!
Donn

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you so much for your generous review of Sunday Morning. I appreciate your time and comments. Blessings.

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Posted 16 Years Ago


Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it! I knew something didn't seem right with the flow and the wording of the poem, so your suggestions were very helpful!

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Posted 16 Years Ago


You are absolutely right my friend, I scold people all the time for using the same word twice in the same sentence or paragraph, but there certainly could be another word used for one of the Souls I used. You have an understanding about what this place is for and you will most certainly become a great writer. I hope you will stick around and put some of your writing here. but, if not, I will take your advice anyway and make my poem just a bit better!
Donn
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