Chris

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Writing

In My Image In My Image

A Book by Chris


Cupid's Arrow Cupid's Arrow

A Poem by Chris


Drift Away Drift Away

A Poem by Chris


This Heart This Heart

A Poem by Chris


Prison Prison

A Poem by Chris


A Haunting A Haunting

A Poem by Chris


Projection Projection

A Poem by Chris


Frozen Frozen

A Poem by Chris


To Be Yours To Be Yours

A Poem by Chris




About Me

I'm a 23-year-old Web QA who graduated from NKU with a major in IT and a minor in creative writing. I'm a bit shy, even on the web, so don't take it personally if you try talking to me and I don't say a lot.

I'm gay, and a romantic, so my fiction usually falls in that category. My poetry tends to be more general but personal.

As for reviews...

I give honest, in-depth feedback; if I think something looks good, I'll tell you, and if I think something could be improved, I'll suggest it. By doing this, I am only trying to help; I am not in any way trying to tear you down, nor am I in any way implying that you're a bad writer. And remember that it's only one person's opinion.

I won't review poetry. I like it, but it's something I kind of struggle with myself, so I feel like I can't offer much.

If you want me to review something, **PM** me. Too many people spam read requests, so I'm going to ignore them. And by asking me to review your work, remember that you are opening yourself up to constructive criticism. If you can't handle that, then think twice before requesting me to read something. Remember, I'm only trying to help. I don't take kindly to being attacked, especially if you requested my review in the first place.


Other Stuff:

Favorite Novels: Grendel, Frankenstein, Lord of the Flies, A Separate Peace, Of Mice and Men, The Kite Runner, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Road Home, Last Summer, Looking for It, The Hunger Games series, Middlesex, Blood and Guts in High School, The Story of O

Favorite Short Stories: "The Minister's Black Veil," "The Scarlet Ibis," "Pretty Vacant," "Everything That Rises Must Converge," "Modeling Life"

Favorite Movies: Brokeback Mountain, Shelter, Jongens (Boys), Latter Days, Morgan, Is It Just Me?, The War Boys, Yossi & Jagger, BearCity, Were the World Mine, Geography Club, Free Fall, Easy A, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Boy Culture, The Green Mile, The Hunger Games


Comments

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Posted 5 Years Ago


You're like my other half when it comes to writing lol (I'm reading your about me and I'm loving you more and more every second haha) Sorry if I sound like a creeper but you're one of the few people on here I still respect lol

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Thank you for the review :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago


It's a critique. I won't take it hard.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


People from other writing sites have told me x.x

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Normally you can do ot either way. I did learn that. O can change ir, but I might as well then change the lines. I needed to give more on Yasu's character.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


ty so much again :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Thank you for the review! <3
I will fix that!!

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Posted 5 Years Ago


I hope you are enjoying it. :3

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Do you understand why it is written the way it's written now? :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Thank you for your review. It was helpful, but it is just explaining why Akio was killed. I am writing in third person so it's in my point of view. The main point of the story is for Asumi to get revenge on his killer.