Faelinn Asphodellus and the F.O.E.

I am re-purposing this page to write a specific collection of stories involving a current character. Hoping to post weekly installments from this point on. I desperately need constructive criticism as I am fairly new to this and haven't exactly developed my own style. I am used to writing poetry, which requires a different style and process altogether, so any help with form would be most appreciated!

I hope that, though experimental at this point, it will be enjoyable!