Vacant

Posted 16 Years Ago

Re; Chronic Vomit. If it shines, a large part of the credit is due to your placement suggestions, it flows so much better. Plus our sister, Luna pointed out the redundent (sp) use of teenage. So....I'm truly glad for the help. :-}

Posted 16 Years Ago

I may only get reviewed by a small tight circle of friends at your cozy little site, but at least I get read there. This place has become a joke....it's more camp than Myspace. Hell, I'd even welcome flames at this point :-}. The only saving grace are the few truly talented friends I've found on this site.

Posted 16 Years Ago

I see you don't think a lot at all of this cleaned cafe Jack! You are my No one friend so get back here with something please. Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago

So what do you think of the new cleaned out Cafe Jack, my favourite bar steward? still reeling from the shock myself but much much calmer than yesterday!!!lol Grinning at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hello Jack! hope your site is up and running smoothly, I wrote a hacker acrostic especially to mark the occasion and will post it soon. Been a bit busy with study, have a tiny window between another deadline essay and dealing with three teenagers and normal stuff, it is all a juggle. Just read your new piece and will reflect on it tonight. Sweet dreams, smiling...really, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago

So where is my Jack? I miss him. clingy Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hello sexy, after a good nights sleep and talking to other writers here, I have decided to come out!lol I am not gay! damn it.lol Smiling at you, Tai

Posted 16 Years Ago

Adding adding add. I see new poems! gonna have a pot load of reading to do when I get a break. good deal.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks for the second look, I feel better about it now. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hey, thanks for the review and suggestions for Symphonious Carvings. In actuality it was a challenge poem (contest) written from a word bank. "mucilage" was part of the mix, lol. I did a rewrite. If you get a chance, see what you think. I'm not all that confident about the change.
Thanks, Luna