Well its a big compliment to me that you enjoyed this so much and you made some interesting points too about us buying into labels etc.
I guess we are all victims, i think we need another woodstock what do you think? lol Thanks again.
Excellent Karl! That is a brilliant critique. Yes, I see what you're saying. Still needs tweaking in a few spots. Yes, those two were bridges to both give a synopsis of the segment and to transition into the next phase. I am so glad you offered such honest and thorough suggestions. I wish I could give you double kudos! Cheers my friend. Rob
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Hey Karl. Thanks for the read of that piece. Hmm. I'll have to think on it a bit. I know the first stanza has a different feel than the rest of the piece, so perhaps that's where it needs to be adjusted. Cheers! Rob
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