Maria Retz

Maria Retz

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About Me

I only share those poems and stories I have written that aren't good enough for publication. Therefore, do not think that these poems and stories are the best I can do, I can do much better ;D
I have completed a collection of poems and am planning on self-publishing it.

I am a writer and singer, not professional (yet), but I hope to one day do writing and singing for a living (hopefully soon). Perhaps also acting if possible...

I am trying to learn English as fluently as possible and will therefore appreciate corrections in the English language.

If you wish to hear me sing, go to my YouTube account:
www.youtube.com/mariaretz

The photos I use are all of me, taken by Karin Clarissa Lydeking

With love to all,

Maria Retz


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Posted 6 Years Ago


Hi sweetie! Pls check out my poem ~~ Finiël's song ~~ and tell me what you think. =)
JRB

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Posted 8 Years Ago


I am finely getting around to saying that I would like to express my gratitude to you for stopping by to read Desire first arose in its longing for life. If I already have said thanks oh, well. And if I did not, it meant a lot to me, as did your review, again thanks for your kind words and thoughts.
Jan/uisiom


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Posted 9 Years Ago


Welcome to wc. org.! I'm sure we'll all learn from one an other. Thank you for your kind comment. :-)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Maria, you write in extremely good English, y ou're definitely not a learner! 'Truly wish I could write in another language! I don't always use punctuati on, especially when I want a piece to flowww! But, although there's technically correct punctuation, writers d o use less or more of it to increase or decrease the meaning of words or/and phrases. It's difficult to explain, reading others' work will help you to understand but, create your own stye. As to y our phrasing, it's fine, very fine. I'm NO expert, far from it, that's why I'm in wc.org - to learn!. :-)
JRB

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Posted 9 Years Ago


The truth within your consciousness is like the horizon that recedes before you. As you journey towards your inner quest in the direction of the leading edge of your belief acceptance. And your knowledge and understanding of the prevailing path grows, the next ascending possibility will always beckon you forth. For wisdom brings together within the truth of your existence, your souls essence, in which is attained by your own experience. Pursue your goal of achieving the truth within your reality of consciousness, in the most direct manner. The paradox is of course, is that you are both the voyager and the pathway; the treasure that you seek is most often slumbering within you or undeveloped in your quest. Its always within you and has always been and always will be. It has not been hidden from your sight, for the most part, its likely you have hidden from it, so wake it up, face it, and accept it, than use it, by becoming it.

Reality thru Consciousness

Jan/Uisiom
August/6/2008




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Posted 9 Years Ago


"We look forward to the time when the Power of Love will replace the Love of Power. Then will our world know the blessings of Peace."

William E. Gladstone

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh. Wow. That really sucks, for lack of better words = (
But yes, at least there's myspace lol.
I"ll miss reading your poems though!


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Posted 10 Years Ago


thanks for the review!

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Posted 10 Years Ago


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Jun 14, 2007 - Jul 14, 2007
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Posted 10 Years Ago


Thanks for reviewing 'You've Got a New Review!', Maria.
I can't believe how many reviews it's received in such a short space of time... surely people don't quickly rush to open a message, just because it says 'You've Got a New review!'??? LOL.
Cheers,

Kevin.