Mark

Mark

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wouldn't mind the hanging but the laying in the grave so long

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San Francisco, CA
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Change

Change

A Poem by Mark
Her Her

A Poem by Mark
My button My button

A Poem by Mark
hunger hunger

A Poem by Mark
Non Sequitur Non Sequitur

A Poem by Mark
The Long Shot The Long Shot

A Poem by Mark
Pulling Pulling

A Poem by Mark
Click Click

A Poem by Mark
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About Me

I go to school, I practice wing chun, I write and I breathe
I prefer blunt or even cutting reviews. Also, I will not read your writing if it is done in multicolored and or radically different fonts or font sizes.


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Posted 6 Months Ago


hahah K, I see it now.

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Posted 6 Months Ago


where's siege you 300 gaylord!? lol

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Posted 7 Months Ago


Hey, did I spam you twice with that request? I know I sent out a request a while back, but I thought that the RRs filtered out redundant requests...hmmmm...

Oh, and hello lol

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Posted 7 Months Ago


Hi, thank you for your friendship, it's much appreciated :)

Crown Court Censored Urban Rap-Poet (2009-2014)

Using urban poetry, I fought back against 'Family Racism' towards my mixed race Daughter. Crown court then censored my poetry for five years.

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Posted 10 Months Ago


yes, the rhythm to "Proverbs from a Fisherman" is very erratic...it's neither iambic nor trochaic, almost anapestic (unstressed unstressed stressed) which is off-kilter for such short lines.

It kinda makes it choppy. As always, will have to debate whether I want to smooth it out into a consistent meter or not, so I may indeed cut a few words out (or add some lol)

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Posted 10 Months Ago


american borat Pictures, Images and Photos

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Posted 11 Months Ago


That's 7-3 so far in favor of the first version. Like I told you once, when I write I often contain a few versions in my head, but I only have one hand, so I can only put one down at a time (damn linearity).

I think it's more reader friendly and can emphasize certain words and help create a rythm, whereas the prose format crunches everything up and sort of creates a more claustrophobic effect. That can be good when "punk zombie" is the title, which is why I was kinda going back and forth a little.

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Posted 11 Months Ago


Yo, Mark, was tallying up the count for my "Punk Zombie" poem, and I didn't see your vote! Want your take on which version you fancy more.

I can give you a "I voted" sticker afterwards lol

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Posted 11 Months Ago


your writing style is very interesting. i really liked Change
:)

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Posted 11 Months Ago


Yeah, the heroine/ needle I was iffy about for the same reasons you have. May end up changing it a bit.
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