Your poems are really awesome which do not shadow away from being true, it shows your courage and your view of the world and stand strong to face it. I think that's not what many posses these days.
yeah i know..doesn't suit the poem..just thought of it..so suggested it to you..well going with the flow of your piece..i was thinking..'fare l'amore'...i was taking french classes..and i think that means 'make love' in french/italian..and it sounds better than 'The Minx'..lemme knw :)