TOF_Matt

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About Me

Matthew Chan grew up in the harsh Tundra of Ontario, Canada, braving freezing temperatures, taming wandering polar bears, and helping the local populace battle the occasional giant ice spider - in other words, a typical Canadian childhood. Deciding he wanted more, he went to University to obtain a degree in Computer Science and Mathematics and currently works as a 3D artist and content producer for a major 3D tools provider. His biggest aspiration right now is to turn Threads of Fate into a published series.

When he's not writing (or defending Canada from the ice spider hordes), Matt enjoys getting lost in various video games, tackling mountains on his snowboard, or shooting and editing video.

To learn more about my novel, Threads of Fate, please visit the official site at http://www.tof.matthew-chan.com.

Just as a note, I think I'm reasonably good at reviewing stories, but I don't know the first thing about poetry. As a result, I tend not to review poetry very often.


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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks a lot for your review on "I Want the Moon." (Sorry, I know it's probably been a long time since you left it, but I just got to it.) It was really helpful! I do agree with you on the second-person; if you don't have much in common with the character, it's hard to get through it.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


ty for your review :)
im really happy with it :D

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Posted 6 Years Ago


No kidding! Their campus is beautiful eh? Unfortunately that's not where I'm meeting them this time (they're teaching a class in Montreal this weekend).

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Hey there.

Thanks so much for the thorough review of the first chapter of "Flight." It was incredibly detailed and helpful to me. As yet, I've not edited anything from this novel, as I feel it's more important to finish the thing than nitpick over wording at this point. Just the same, I very much appreciate the examples you've given, as it's quite true that I can be a bit wordy at times (to put it mildly).

After I'm through moving house, I hope to be able to read through one of your works as well.

Cheers,
Nic
P.S. Pixar, is it? I'm actually moving about 2 blocks away from their headquarters. ;]

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Hey, thanks for the review :D It wasn't negative, it was very helpful. I appreciate you investing the time for such a meaningful critique! I agree with most, if not all of your points.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Gah! The Hunger Games! I LOVE that series, and I am surprisingly looking forward to it (even if Lenny Kravitz is playing Cinna). =D

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Posted 6 Years Ago


thanks you so much for all your critique and help on my story. It's kind of the first draft and I'm trying to get a feel of how everyone likes it. I think once I finish the actual book and get all the ideas out, I can go back and fix everything and put more actual detail in there. But I appreciate that you took the time to go read the story and show me how to fix it.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Thanks man, I appreciate that. = )

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Damn.

Hope you feel better!