i got it!
haha actually what you said about it was pretty helpful, and I know what you mean about the ending bit of it. I've always had trouble ending my poems because im usually between wanting to give that last resounding line but i fall short and it ends up sounding forced, like shoving a wall in front it. But yeah i was pretty much in those stages....maybe as i work through it i'll be able to bleed myself dry with all of the pent up emotion lol
I think I'll try another ending....to try and keep the promise there.
But thank you mucho Grandpa. You always do make me want to do better! =]
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