#1 Crush  June 19, 2007 - June 26, 2007

Contest Completed


1st Place - [writing deleted]
2nd Place - [writing deleted]
3rd Place - [writing deleted]


Alright, life is starting to calm down so I now have the time to read tons of stuff, so I thought that I would start another one of my contests.

I want obsession, sick twisted love inspired by #1 Crush by Garbage. All you really need is the lyrics that are provided, but I recommend listening to the actual song. Don't use any of the lyrics from it! You're better then that.
So basically I want twisted love, pain, and desire. Make chills go up and down my spine, and be creative about it. I also like good use of puctuation, if you know what I mean. Gives good power to the piece.
Have fun writing! I look forward to reading all of your juicy poems.

"I would die for you
I would die for you
I've been dying just to feel you by my side, to know that you're mine

I would cry for you
I would cry for you
I will wash away your pain with all my tears, I'm drowning on fear

I will pray for you
I will pray for you,
I will sell my soul for something pure and true, someone like you

See your face every place that I walk in
Hear your voice every time that I'm talkin'
You will believe in me, and I will never be ignored

I will burn for you
Feel pain for you
I will twist the knife and bleed my aching heart, and tear it apart

I will lie for you
Beg and steal for you
I will crawl on hands and knees until you see, you're just like me

Violate all the love that I'm missin'
Throw away all the pain that I'm livin'
You will believe in me, and I can never be ignored

I would die for you
I would kill for you
I will steal for you
I'd do time for you
I will wait for you
I'd make room for you
I'd sink ships for you,
Take the cross for you
Make me a part of you
Because I believe in you
I believe in you
I would die for you"


I'll be your friend! ...



Created Jun 19, 2007