Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ 'BAROQUE SONNET" (Fun with Form) with Poeticpiers  May 21, 2009 - May 31, 2009

Contest Completed

Congratulations

Gold Star - THE HORRID THREAT OF DEMONS (Baroque Sonnet)
Silver Star - [writing deleted]
Bronze Star - Bogus

Details

Planning stage.

This garden is not as it should be. It�s sad to see
neglected now and over grown. It was once known
To house a rather special stone which stood alone.
Which is not where it used to be as you can see.
This garden suffers from neglect but I expect.
It can be made beautiful once more, we can restore
it to how it was to before. To be once more
A quiet pace to meditate, its not too late.
Despite its neglected state I cannot wait
to start the transformation .It must be done.
I�m happy to anticipate though I must wait.
Before I can contemplate the finished state
of my own haven in the sun. Not yet begun

Baroque sonnet
Alexandrine meter
6 metric feet or 12 syllables per line

Rhyme pattern
abba
cddc
eef
ggf
11/05/2009

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3 Submissions
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Created May 22, 2009