Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Poet Craft: Form Abhanga with Salvatore! November 9, 2009 - November 23, 2009
Contest Completed
Congratulations
Gold -
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Silver - Abhanga/Alone
Bronze - Sparkle
Honorable mention - Heartache amiss
Silver - Abhanga/Alone
Bronze - Sparkle
Honorable mention - Heartache amiss
DetailsPoet Craft: Abhanga
Here is a poetic form that originated in India. Though there is no required number of stanzas, for this contest we will require four or five stanzas. Each stanza is a quatrain (four lines) with a rhyme pattern of abbc and a syllable count of 6,6,6,4. Here is an example of an abhanga poem. WILL THE DAY EVER COME? Wars have yet to promise And deliver real peace. Will battles ever cease? We need to pray. A country challenges Its neighbor for more land And though a change of hands, Life stays the same. If two people settled Spats by fighting a duel, Wouldnt we call them fools? Its so absurd! Yet nations send armies Of young men and women Who do what theyre bidden And often die. Will the day ever come When wars are outdated And human life rated In flesh and blood? Lets opt for the table Besides staging a meal As a place to make deals Instead of war. # 2008 Salvatore Buttaci Deadline: November 23, 2009 Prizes: Gold, Silver, Bronze, and one Honorable Mention Prizes1st 2nd 3rd & Honorable Mention
ModeratorHelenaBanora Point, N.S.W., AustraliaStats4 Contestants
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