Best Review  May 29, 2010 - July 31, 2010

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Spectacular poetic response!!! - The Good and The Evil

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We (Serah and Emmah) invite you to submit your review of the following poem by Eben J Felix (the founder of The Fourth Dimension) ...

. desires of a fourth dimension..


i'd scribble on fabrics of silence
color it with red and white.,
bribe it with silly secrets
to sing you a colorful rhyme..

i'd whisper to playing fireflies
ask them to light the way,
of thoughts that lose direction
in a world of bizarre days.

i'd save bits and pieces
of time that fails to pass by.,
clothed in your fragrance
i'll live it before i die

i'd smudge images of you
on the canvas in my mind.,
with threads of bliss and blue
i'll wrap them deep inside.

strange., are what i want to do
how else would i want to.,
give shape to this strange feeling
of strange love and strange you. .

P.S. This verse led to the creation of The Fourth Dimension.

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Created May 29, 2010