Complete this short story  March 30, 2014 - April 10, 2014

Story must start with the given paragraph.
Starting paragraph :
'It was half past six in the evening when the police arrived at the crime scene. The bakery was surrounded by a crowd of journalists and people from the town. Cop Fox and his team were quick to enter and seal the crime scene, telling the journalists to clear away. The staff was pale and seemed frozen with fear, the two corpses lay blood covered on the flat. Fox knew one of them very well as he's been a customer of this bakery; it was the 35 year old baker. But I was most surprised when his partener told him who the other dead person was, so this was the reason of all the press surrounding the bakery.

M.K. Jawdat

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Created Mar 31, 2014