First Chapters  February 18, 2008 - April 18, 2008

Contest Completed

Congratulations

Perfect - [writing deleted]
Excellent - [writing deleted]
Fantastic - 1 City
Brilliant - I
Amazing - [writing deleted]
Incredible - Prolog
Really good - God Knows I\'m Helpless: Chapter One: Holy War
Good - hero squad-prologue

Details

Is your first chapter enough to make me want to read more? Yea? You think so? Hmm... we'll see...
I'll give pretty harsh critques, so if you can't take it, please do not enter.
Any genre really, but just enter the first chapter. It doesn't matter if you've finished the novel or not, or if you've just written this one chapter.
Please include a description; it can make my life easier.
Luck to all.
Shadow.

Prizes

Comments from me on at least one other piece; the knowledge that you impressed more than one person.

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Created Feb 18, 2008