First Chapters  February 18, 2008 - April 18, 2008

Contest Completed


Perfect - [writing deleted]
Excellent - [writing deleted]
Fantastic - 1 City
Brilliant - I
Amazing - [writing deleted]
Incredible - Prolog
Really good - God Knows I\'m Helpless: Chapter One: Holy War
Good - hero squad-prologue


Is your first chapter enough to make me want to read more? Yea? You think so? Hmm... we'll see...
I'll give pretty harsh critques, so if you can't take it, please do not enter.
Any genre really, but just enter the first chapter. It doesn't matter if you've finished the novel or not, or if you've just written this one chapter.
Please include a description; it can make my life easier.
Luck to all.


Comments from me on at least one other piece; the knowledge that you impressed more than one person.



46 Contestants
46 Submissions
Created Feb 18, 2008

Heaven Is Accessible
Heaven Is Accessible
Wondering how to be closer to the Spirit? Have you questioned religion lately? Tired of the same routine in life?