Helena's Blue Rose Cafe ~ Form: TANKA January 29, 2013 - February 12, 2013
Contest Completed
Congratulations
Gold Medal -
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Silver Medal - The Stray
Bronze Medal - Liquid Sunshine
Albert's Award - The Deep Blue Ocean
Silver Medal - The Stray
Bronze Medal - Liquid Sunshine
Albert's Award - The Deep Blue Ocean
DetailsTANKA poems are written about nature, seasons, love, sadness and other strong emotions. This form of poetry dates back almost 1200 years ago. There are different methods of writing TANKA in English, but the most common form is WRITING FIVE LINES consisting of 5-7-5-7-7 English SYLLABLES. This is also considered to be the most traditional form of tanka. There are FIVE LINES in a TANKA POEM Line one - 5 syllables Beautiful mountains Line two - 7 syllables Rivers with cold, cold water. Line three - 5 syllable White cold snow on rocks Line four - 7 syllables Trees over the place with frost Line five - 7 syllables White sparkly snow everywhere. Note: You count the SYLLABLES on your fingers as you say the line... Line one - BEAUT/ I/ FUL/ MOUN/ TAINS 5 syllables Line two - RIV/ ERS/ WITH/ COLD,/ COLD/ WA/ TER 7 syllables Line three -WHITE/ COLD/ SNOW/ ON/ ROCKS 5 syallables Line four - TREES/ OV/ ER/ THE/ PLACE/ WITH/ FROST 7 syallables Line five - WHITE/ SPARK/LY /SNOW/ EVERY/ WHERE 7 syllables Of course allowances are made for our varying accents in our ' Mother Tongue', when counting the 'beats' but as long as we have the correct number of syllables pertaining to the contest requirement it is quite acceptable. EXAMPLE One example of tanka is a poem written by Gerard John Conforti, of New York City. In his book, Now That the Night Ends (1996), he never varies from this pattern: This cold winter night the snow clings to the tree boughs in the pale moonlight the kisses of your soft lips warm this aching heart of mine Tanka is a beautiful form and I look forward to reading your submissions. Happy writing! Prizes1st 2nd 3rd and Honorable Mention
ModeratorHelenaBanora Point, N.S.W., AustraliaStats5 Contestants
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