Pain  April 4, 2010 - April 10, 2010

Contest Completed


captured best emotion - Dear Dad
words were captivating - Damned to sin
felt/believed the pain - [writing deleted]
strong emotion - Soundtrack to my life
good sense of anger - My Final Submission
extremely depressing - Though I know, I still hold on...
felt the desperation for hope - empty


All I want is to have a poem that shows pain of any kind. I want to FEEL your pain in your words. Convince me that what you feel is real, make me be able to put myself in your place of pain to feel that pain. It can be pain that brings you to anger or any type of emotion that has a heavy feeling on pain that you can reflect and get me absorbed in it.

PS: Awards aren't based on 1st, 2nd or 3rd. You simply get an award from what you put off better in the poem. I may or may not acknowledge who got first and was the best in my opinion.

I'd ask that you please also submit the same pieces into the contest followed in this link
it's the same contest, except that the people vote instead of me. Thank you.



48 Contestants
106 Submissions
Created Apr 5, 2010