Re-Create The Poem  July 6, 2007 - July 8, 2007

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Poetic Genius Award - [writing deleted]
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Re-Create the Poem, in your own words, make it strong and breathtaking!! The poem to use is as follows:

I Wish You Could Have Seen

I wish you could have seen,
How the pouring rain fell upon the pine trees of spring.
And how the forest seemed to be bleeding,
bleeding with the tears of generations of humanity.
She is always dreaming and wishing that she can become,
Everything she promised her elders she would be.
And she wonders why her eyes have to bleed,
as the clouds of glory reign over her.

I wish you could have stood beside us,
as we watched the snow fall upon the tar of our souls.
And how roses bloomed from the ground with glory and sadness,
as men learned to live lives that were meant to be.
And why she believes that she cannot be loved,
as she watches two young lovers embrace under the light of her eyes.
I wish you could have seen
the love, my very love, fall upon me for you.

J.A. Guerrero


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Created Jul 6, 2007