Show, Don't Tell - HATE  December 18, 2013 - January 31, 2014

Reading and Deliberating


TELLING SENTENCE: She hated him.

How many different ways can you SHOW me that she hates him?

Show me through physical sensations, actions, behavior, posture, facial expression, dialogue, thoughts etc

Write only a sentence if you will. Make a list of sentences. Mix everything into a few paragraphs if that is what you want to do. Make a list of different ways to show HATE in writing.

The more ideas you come up with, the better your chances to win. The better those ideas are, the better you chances are.

What would YOU think, feel, do or say if you hated someone?
Someone you know hates someone else. How can you show this to me?


Winner !!! Winner !!!
2nd place 2nd place
3rd place 3rd place


Moss, Ostfold, Norway


7 Contestants
7 Submissions
Created Dec 18, 2013

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  • Any Member can Submit
  • All types of Writing can be Submitted
  • All Genres of Writing can be Submitted
  • Each Contestant May Submit 9 Pieces of Writing
  • Writing may be submitted 12/18/2013 - 1/31/2014
  • Winners will be decided by User Votes


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