You call that Action?  June 9, 2007 - June 15, 2007

submit your action story...now, don't want any of that rambling narration or the quirky oddities of the character...see how well you can get straight into the action, blasting a picture into the mind's eye, keep the reader from skipping a word--unless its because they're reading so fast because they want to see what happens next. Doesn't have to be car chases, explosions, or sword-fights either--just a telling moment where your protagonist feels like he/she's about to crumple

Rylan Batten

Jefferson City, MO

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Created Jun 9, 2007