More Details=More Realistic Characters

More Details=More Realistic Characters

A Lesson by TopHatGirl
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Getting in depth with your character.

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     So, you have the basic stuff. So lets get into the hard details, really digging into your characters inner self. Lets start out with the brain of the character.
 
              The Brain:
 
       Fears: (example: afraid of the dark)
       Strengths: (example: very social)
       Weaknesses: (example: dies whenever touches something sharp)
       What you love about them: (ex:Is brave whenever someone needs her/him to be)
       What you hate about them: (ex:Won't go near any dark places, stubborn.)
       Good points: (ex:Kind, good sense of humor.)
       Relationships: (ex:Can talk with complete strangers, even murderers. But is silent around mom.)
      

  The brain makes your character seem realistic to you, someone who you could share a class with, or sit next to at lunch.


            The Heart:

         Hobbies: (ex:reading)
         Talents: (ex:Walks through walls)
         Favorite sport: (ex:basketball)
         History: (ex:Father died when young, doesn't like to talk about it, lived with her mother, whos a drunk.)
          Personal Goal: (ex:To find her father's killer)
          Bad Habits: (ex: smokes)

The heart makes your character seem realistic to the reader. Everyone has a few characteristics that anyone who knows them can list off at any moment. The personal goal drives the plot, the bad habits hold them back. Talents are what make the goal reachable.

             Outside:

     Clothing: (ex: black shirt, black pants, black jewelry)
     Appearance: (ex: long black hair, celery green eyes, black nails, tall, skinny,)
     What you would find in their room: (ex: poetry, black roses, posters of death, a bunk bed)
     Best Friend: (ex: Julie, the exact opposite of her, but still a great friend)
     Accent, if any. (ex: British accent.)
     Occupation: (Fast food worker)

Don't dwell too much on appearance. Though it is vital, a common trap for writers is to spend too much describing what exact shade of blue the eyes are instead of focusing on what's more important. Never go for the cliche of spending two paragraphs describing the clothes your character is putting on in the morning. A general rule of thumb is that if you're describing the average human for more than three sentences, you're writing too much.

I like to keep these outlines in a separate word document for reference. Don't spend too long on this, and feel free to go back and edit. Often times you'll decide you'll want something different for your character, that's okay. The character you started your rough draft with will be drastically different by the end of your final draft.

Another good route to go is to list out a beginning to end. Keep this simple, one word sentences will do.

Beginning: weak
End: strong

See? Nothing too extensive; you don't want to tie yourself down. Vague words can be helpful if you keep them in mind while you're writing.
    

           


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Posted 1 Year Ago


It has given me a lot to think about concerning my characters. And where I am going with them.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


Fantastic the way you set it out in bullet points, has helped me greatly. Keep up the good work.

Thank you,

Jake

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Posted 3 Years Ago


Well organized and to the point

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Posted 3 Years Ago


I liked how you divided everything and explained their affects and who they affect.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


This is very helpful. I'm not trying to pick or anything, but you might just change "know" to "now" in the very last sentence. It should read, "You now have a living breathing charger, beaming with personality." I knew what you meant, though.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


This has helped me a lot. Thank you very much.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


This is an important one. Definitely enjoying reading these!

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Posted 4 Years Ago


Thank you. I found these extremely helpful.

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Posted 4 Years Ago


I like these steps.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


I like this step.
It's really helpful, rather than putting it all together as you go along, you get it all down to start with by establishing the personality and then the looks.
Thanks!

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Hi, I'm TopHatGirl! If you're here about my character lessons or to get some advice, email me instead of messaging at brightflower17@yahoo.com. This is because I don't go on this site as much anym..