Natural DialogA Lesson by ericdeben
Critique #1: Dialog > Your dialog isn't natural.
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Added on August 25, 2011
Last Updated on August 25, 2011
Some town, MA
AboutI'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..