Replacing "said"

Replacing "said"

A Lesson by ericdeben
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Critique #2: Dialog > "You use 'said' too much"

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Working on it.

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I'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..