Replacing "said"A Lesson by ericdeben
Critique #2: Dialog > "You use 'said' too much"
Working on it.
Added on August 26, 2011
Last Updated on August 26, 2011
Some town, MA
AboutI'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..