Section 1: DialogA Lesson by ericdeben
"You have a problem with your dialog"
Working on it
"Your dialog isn't natural"Natural Dialog
"You use 'said' too much"
"You need actions with your dialog"
"That isn't like your character(s) to talk like that"
Added on August 26, 2011
Last Updated on August 26, 2011
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AboutI'm 15 years old and I'm an aspiring filmmaker. When you review my writing, don't just shower me with praise; I can use all the constructive criticism I can get. I'll be taking creative writing class..