Voice Development part 4

Voice Development part 4

A Lesson by Camille Corbett
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The last lesson in our segment

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By now you should be masters of voice and diction. I would like for you to send me your work, each of you, send it not request. In either a message here or in this email:
venice133@yahoo.com

This is how I will know what next subject to teach on this course. I need to know what you guys need to work on.So please do send it, it will only take 2 minutes of your time.In this lesson I have attached a poem, I want you to write down on the comment book your perceived voice and diction. I will message you to tell you whether you passed or failed. Please pass my dears.

Cycle of love 
By Nichole Corbett


 Hatred had once been Love,
Which sprouted from a liking, that had been formed from an indifference,
and as our cycle continued seemed to be no significance,
Between our love and the love others before. 

No creativity reigned our hearts,
Causing our kisses to be mere touches of lips, which dissolved caresses into a sweeping of fingers, 
thereby leading to the blasphemy of love making by turning it into act designed by swingers.

But as our tawdry affair came to and end,
It was followed by the berating of ourselves, that resulted in the sullying of our hearts,
and was finished with the feeling of  blackness due a depressed state, something that had been creeping from the start.
And as our love turned, so did it's taste,
for a drab love makes for a tantalizing hate.


Also guys, if you are willingly please indicate if I can use your writings for my lessons, for prompts like these or even for basic analysis. Have a good week! I love you!


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Camille Corbett
Camille Corbett

Marietta, GA



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I'm a 21 year old Fulbright ETA writing to kill the time and find my sanity. I have been gone for a while. But I have returned, so watch out for some new stories.