Lesson 1: DESCRIPTIVE language

Lesson 1: DESCRIPTIVE language

A Lesson by Brandon Perales
"

Don't bore your reader with a simple short sentence!

"

Readers DO NOT read if there are boring sentences!


Example 1)

The boy fell off the tree and cried.


Example 2)

The car was red and it looked new.


Readers DO read FASCINATING, MAGICAL, EXCITING sentences!


Example 1)

Once the boy fell off the mountain high tree, the boy's eyes filled with tears and felt so much pain.


Example 2)

The car was blood crimson red, and it looked fresh out of the car factory with it's shiny gloss.




Next Lesson


Comments

Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

207 Views
0 Subscribers
Added on March 13, 2014
Last Updated on March 13, 2014
Average

No Rating

My Rating

Login to rate this



Author

Brandon Perales
Brandon Perales

Los Angeles, CA



About
1995: I was born. 2008: I got into writing and started to write everything I went through when my sister left to the military. 2009: I wanted to be a novelist. 2010: I gave up writing mainly becaus..