Lesson 2: NO RUN-ON SENTENCES!A Lesson by Brandon Perales
Run-on sentences ruin the interest of a literature work.
I know you want to jam everything in into a sentence, but DON'T DO IT!
You don't want your reader to be out of breath and confuse them with run-on sentences.
"I walked down the street and I got hit by a car, the driver drove off, so I had to walk home with a limp, and it hurt a lot when I walked."
HOW IT SHOULD BE:
"I walked down the street and got hit by a car. The driver drove off, so I had to walk home with a limp. It hurt a lot when I walked."
Added on March 14, 2014
Last Updated on March 14, 2014
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About1995: I was born. 2008: I got into writing and started to write everything I went through when my sister left to the military. 2009: I wanted to be a novelist. 2010: I gave up writing mainly becaus..