Day 21: GypsyA Lesson by Lizzy
the images are: scissors, hand, capricorn sign, flag poison skull, snowflake, ying yang, cross use them in order in your story.
You are in a bus depot in New York. A gypsy appears out of nowhere and hands you this card.
Use all eight elements that appear on the card in a story that begins:
It almost seems impossible for me to go back to that split second when...
Take the next step:
Make your writing more clear and interesting in a split second by changing from passive voice to active voice. Compare these examples.
Dull and Passive: My car was driven to Florida by Jake.
More alive and active: Jake drove my car to Florida.
Go back through this exercise (and others you've done in this course) and change passive voice to active voice.
Added on June 26, 2013
Last Updated on June 26, 2013