Two: Starting Out

Two: Starting Out

A Lesson by Belator Books
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How to plan and then begin writing...

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Beginning your book is admittedly one of the most difficult parts about writing a lengthy piece. The best method to help spur the book along to fruition—that I have encountered as of yet-remains one of the most simple, conceptually: individual, successive chapter notes. While this concept may sound somewhat rudimentary it is invaluable as a writing tool, not only in starting the process with an informed ‘kick’ but it also aids the writer in keeping the plot on track (as far as where one wishes the story to go)... and lastly, it helps the writer remember to include all the important details and various tie-ins.

Making Your Sequential Chapter Notes:

1. Sit down. 2. Using either a blank notebook, computer word processing page, or a pad of ‘sticky’ notes, write the words “Chapter One”. 3. Under this title write out one-line details or phrases about what should be included in this chapter. If using sticky notes, use as many as you need under the chapter title to help you grasp the gist of what you want to say in that chapter. For instance, on a Chapter One note a casual observer might see phrases like ‘character introduction’, ‘background history’, ‘main character trips over a threshold and falls down stairs’, etc. Even if it is merely one detail about what’s in the chapter, write it down. 4. Turn to another page/note and continue on through each chapter in a similar fashion. Once the notes are written for each chapter you can use them as a reference or add in more notes as the writing progresses; changes are easy to make.

Personally I prefer using sticky notes, as I can re-arrange events in a different order if I so choose. Paper is usually best for this process, as computer files can be lost or accidentally deleted. A fellow writer among our acquaintance tried to be inventive one year and used a wide dry-erase board for his sequential notes; after writing laboriously for an hour, he suddenly realized that his forearm had brushed away about half it as he leaned on the board. Do bear in mind that these notes are not iron-clad; the writer is allowed to viably brush aside any feeling of chagrin if half the notes must be crumpled up and replaced. In writing my own books I've found this method especially helpful in avoiding becoming lost pursing tangents, or inadvertently creating lop-sided chapters.

Although perspective is a more important aspect of planning your book, I chose to address the issue at the end of this section in hopes that it may stay at the forefront of your mind.

Being there is no way to say this lightly, it is best to address the issue of first-person narrative straightforwardly: there is a glut of FPP (First-Person Perspective) novels being penned these days, indeed so much so that even as a book reviewer I am absurdly sick of reading them. That being said, there are some fine examples of classic literature in FPP that I adore to read, namely Robinson Crusoe, Jane Eyre, The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes, Mrs. Mike and one of my favorite books of all time: My Family & Other Animals. If you are dead-set on FPP for your novel please, please, please read these books first. The writers of these pieces did not make the mistake of using the 'speaking-from-within-my-head-to-myself' voice in their narrative, but instead related what they saw and felt, using the five senses and telling the tales of others as they wandered through life. Some books have been pulled off as nothing more than full-bodied journal entries--Bram Stoker's Dracula--or even as compiled reports. Generally, however, the majority of good fiction is written in Third-Person Perspective (i.e. Pride & Prejudice); this is my favorite perspective to write in as the thoughts of each character can be included, and without the ridiculous habit of stating to the reader that the POV (point of view) has changed.

Second-Person perspective is most prevalent for use in guidebooks, DIY books or 'choose your own adventure' type books, however, there is a long list of "notable works" in SPP up to scrutiny at the following wikipedia page, along with links to several critical essays/articles on that particular perspective:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Second-person_narrative

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Thankyou for this. It was very helpful.

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This helps so much!!

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This does help! I am writing in first person.
I am afraid of getting off track.
Faith

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Great help, thank you!!!!

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Thanks. These are great tips!
Normally I write in strictly first person, as I like feeling the main character... I do sometimes use third person.
I love the sticky note idea! That was a great help.
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Posted 5 Years Ago


I really like the sticky note idea and it really helped me with my story. Thx for writing this course

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I dislike writing in first person, it forces me to say 'I' about a hundred times.

Third person is what I use.

I really like the sticky note idea, I'll defiantly be using that.

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I love Third Person Perspective. Maybe it's because I can use my own voice more, but I like being able to full control over explaining something thoroughly as much as I want and then include the thoughts of the characters where it fits best.

Also, the chapters notes thing is something I just realized I already do! I stumbled upon it and I agree. It's the best way to keep the plot in check.

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This is great advice! I always ponder the question of point of view, constantly going back to change the story. I do agree my best stories are written from the Third-Person Perspective.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


I agree I am so sick of reading first person that when I see it i want to scream. That being said. When I was new to writting that's how I wrote and could not understand why people hated my writing. After doing some serching and learning through other writers work I understood.

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