What Impression Is Made From What Your Characters Say?A Lesson by oops sorry (not really)
" Ask me why." " Okay why." " Because I say so." " Why do you say so?" " Because I'm beautiful." " Why are you beautiful?" " Because I am." " Why do you keep on saying because?" " Because I like it."
I don't know about you, but if my mother said to me, " Where's the telephone?" and it was sitting right in front of her nose, I would think that she was either blind or couldn't see beyond the end of her nose.
Okay. I'm going to put a little interlude here and you figure out what kind of person these to characters are by what they're saying.
" You know, I used to be in the CSI club. I just hate idiots which explains why I don't like myself," person #1 says.
" Cats. Bats. Mats. Fats. Which is you favorite?" person #2 says.
" The dog."
" Yeah that's my favorite, too."
What would you think of those people if they actually said stuff like that?
So unless you're character is lying, I wouldn't make him/her say something that was against their character. Like having your character yelling swear words at a tree when he's a very fervent catholic and has a very mild temper. And don't make your characters say stupid stuff just to further the plot! It completely ruins the book/story or whatever your working on.
So yeah. That's it. Enjoy your life, keep stuffing that pudding down your throat, and don't forget to write.
Added on January 3, 2012
Last Updated on January 3, 2012
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