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About Me

I am 23 years old and I have been writing for seven years. I am currently taking a course by mail to improve my writing, but I'm always looking for more opinions and any way to improve my writing. Please give me honest feedback, tell me what you really think whether good or bad, because I will be doing the same for you. I think through all my reviews carefully and try to say everything in a constructive, inoffensive way, but if I slip and you are offended or upset, please know that I did not mean it intentionally, and I will assume the same of your reviews of my own work. I only wish to help and to be helped in return. I have never been published, mostly because I believe that my work is never done. I am a recovering perfectionist. I have written a novel and will most likely be posting it here. It is my baby, but I try very hard not to get defensive about it. Also for fun I write fanfiction at fanfiction.net. Some of you may sneer at this, but it has been wonderful practice for me in an environment that is laidback and encouraging. I believe that practice makes perfect and writing anything, even fanfiction, is practice. If you would like to read my work there my profile url is fanfiction.net/~azaldiatook. Feel free to leave a review and let me know that you found me on writerscafe, I would love to know there are other fanfiction writers here. I guess that's about it. In the words of Rick Blaine: "Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."

P.S. I would like to add that I have started a blog. Just a little sarcastic view of anything and everything, check it out! fogisbeautiful.wordpress.com


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Posted 14 Years Ago


Thanks!

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Mad at you ? :P nahhhhhh. thnk you :) It's ok , it's ok. Ghehe have been been busy myself too , and now writerscafe is hating me and telling me to review some more from your work haha :). And yes i know i don't tell too much about the murder of his lover. I'll tell that in some back-flashes :). About the hair ... i kind used my own body for the main character so , i didnt really know how to describe it haha , im partly ginger you see :P , so when i move my head a little , you can see a ginger sort of shine on my hair (A).

Thnx for the review :D

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Posted 14 Years Ago


yeah we got a lot of ehm actually :P most are monuments though :)

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Haha yessss , we are the crazy people with the wooden shoes , the tullips , the weed , and the w****s :P TBH i do have a pair of those :) , and trust me , their not that bad O:. Mostly farmers use them though , but i can see why , they never break or anything , youll never feel anything hurt your feet , their warm , and you can break knees and shins by just kicking annoying people O: AWESOME :D But , you cant run with them :(

And yes i did work a whole summer for 2 years at a flower farm , and they had tullips sooo :P (A) i prefer these actually : http://bi.gazeta.pl/im/3/3231/z3231703X.jpg

Anyway our country is beautiful and not just because of the weed policy and the w****s in Amsterdam and stuff :P You should see Queens day insome cities O: thats insane , but cool :)

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Posted 14 Years Ago


wow you added my prologue to your library O: * is honored *

Anyway im reading your chapter 1 *does the naught/freaky eyebrow thingy *

muahha