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Train Ride

A Poem by Chris Smith

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About Me

I'm 20 years Old, Hearing Impaired, been through a Hell of a lot, and I'm still here due to the ones that i keep close around me, and the ones who never leave my side no matter what i do.

I've been a Poet for as long as i can remember i started off on the back of my best friend who helped familiarize my self with rhyme scheme's and free-verse styles.

I owe a lot to everyone around me, so this is my way to expressing my gratitude.

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Barry S. Maltese

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hey Chris
It will be great to see you again. I know that you are ut there living you life, so it will be great to share some time again

:-) Dad

Vincent Maltese

Posted 16 Years Ago

lol no doubt.

Lucky Me

Posted 16 Years Ago

ha, I still think about stripping, but I'm too much of a pansy and I have all these damn morals! lol

Brianna Brie

Posted 16 Years Ago

Thanks, Chris, for reviewing Pitch-dark. Really appreciate your comments and yes my days are better.

Ruby Moon

Posted 16 Years Ago

thank you for your uplifting comments...
it is great to have comments like these
it really makes me want to continue writing and doing my best

Ruby Moon

Posted 16 Years Ago

welcome
i added it because it was a great write
so you have only yourself to thank when someone adds you
;)

Lucky Me

Posted 16 Years Ago

Hey thanks for the reviews. There are many things we write in a fit of emotion that we don't take literal in real life. I would never give up the chance to love in fear of getting hurt, I may dodge and run but I won't deny it. I think it's apparent that I wouldn't give up a chance to love by the pure fact that I was discussing my love for another male other than my father. In the same sense I'd never strip. I like to think of it, but never could. Again if you read into the person who is writing the words not just by reading the words alone, but reading how they are written and the tone in which those words portray, you'll see the real meaning is not "I want to strip". It's "I'm mad at life". As for the boy/dad one "I'm mad at love". Two very simple concepts. Again thanks for reading :)

V. Lucien Maier

Posted 16 Years Ago

ahhh man, I am sorry. I hope to one day offer my work in a format that is visible as well.
I do have some of my work in written format I maybe able to rustle up if you are that curious.
And I will certainly do my best to read some of your work.

Sea Dreams ~marina~

Posted 16 Years Ago

Aha! I knew there was something familiar about it. A great write.
- M

Brianna Brie

Posted 16 Years Ago

Once again, thanks for your kind words. It is much appreciated that you read and reviewed "Backseat Lover" for me.

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