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My 1st Short Story (What do you tink?)

Posted 1 Year Ago

I wrote my first short story about 2 weeks ago. So far it has just over 200 views but I have only recieved positive feedback. I refuse to believe my story is, in any way, perfect. If you can take a look at it and give me honest feedback, I would greatly appreciate it.

 

The link to my Short Story, entitled "Screaming Silence" is:

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/8182731/screaming_silence.html?cat=44

 

*Also, if you like the story, It would be great if you could share the link with some friends*