Forum Revising Can I get some opinions on the prologue to my new ..

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/InsaneTomato/974039/ Need help with with making it more scientifically accurate for now. I'd also like some thoughts of whether or not it's an interesting premise. Eventually I'd like to make my "zombies evolve" and I'm planning for the main character to get fleshed out but I'm presenting the main story as being his journal/research notes so I want it to happen organically as the story progresses. In the beginning I want him to be emotionally distant and professional but slowly go into his past, his age, his relationships, and for him to grow a lot.