Forum Revising I could use some suggestions. I'm stuck

A few of my writings are incomplete or could use some work. I am looking for some people to take a look at them and give me constructive, helpful criticism back. I will not take kindly to those who either give unhelpful criticism like, " That was awful scrap it, the whole thing." I will not look kindly at those who are rude. Criticize in a nice way, please.  

Any takers?

I am available any time... Really that's exactly what I need as well. Criticism but supportive, and constructive most of all. So if you'd like I can give it a go. I have quite a background of critisizing writings so no worries :)