Forum Test-Out-Your-Work Just put up a longish piece (for the site) and...

Anyone willing to trudge through a 9 page piece to give me feedback on how I could possibly split it up for the site? If there are any takers... You rule... The story on my page is entitled "Here Comes the Fire Brigade!"

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I've read and enjoyed a lot of your work.... I'll read yours if you read mine.. /grin