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2 surrealist verses I wrote--hope you like. Let me know what you think

10 Years Ago


Penetrance

snake eat frog cozy
female snaps white tree branch
I spoke silence and cried cudgel-bean
baby elephant's tusk
Ivory tunnel wherein cops came in
Eternal seed
Spill dew upon the chastened ground
Food come up
Danse Macabre
Dance Macabre
Dance, Macabre
Dance, Macabre!
Love like a winter storm,
Bitter and torn,
Like the pages of a beat,
All that is weathered and worn,
Comes down at your feet
Cat jumps on bed
How we miss a proper psychopath like you, Ted
Now we’re all nutcases in a nuthouse nation
America is a nut tree, strewing nuts all along the path
A girl on a bicycle picks one up and puts it in her basket
The year is not as it was before
And she is peddling to her grandfather’s house
Along the way she hits a stone wedged between the slots
And she is upended from her bike
Like a snail out of its shell
And she hits the ground on her back in a blue? Is it a red dress?
I can’t tell
Anyway there are flowers on it
It might as well be a tablecloth
It is inauspicious
And a gruesome atrocity
She lies on the ground, with nowhere to go
She decides to have a snack
And flipping open the basket pulls out the nut
She cracks it open
And put the naked, fetal-positioned flesh
On her tongue
Wouldn’t you know that’s the first place you put a nut?
Then she closed her mouth
Crunch crunch crunch
Hammer of the Supreme Court is coming down
I forget who this girl is anyway
I’ve lost interest in her altogether
Her teeth, her hair, her face, which was never turned towards me,
her ugly freakin dress,
Which isn’t hard to imagine,
She looks like a Quaker going to her first dance party,

I tell you, her clothes represent the massacre of the Jews,
But who she is I couldn’t tell you at all
Tuxedo black drawn quick tight wrong
Red gondola bid me tea-tote farewellisms
Exquisite monstrosities denote fatigue in the overall infrastructure
Marble outcasts in Thebes groan bandsoon
Terracotta landmarks dream of schools scorched in new high noons
David and Goliath duel first head south then you’re eyes
Michael watches as dunes rise from hopeful farms
Dog drag leash and finds turtle
Clandestine memories sweep under the chimney
And in their expiration go up into the night sky over Paris to blanket people
Faraway, fargone, farlost, farsung
Eden is an eternity waiting to happen
Gone the day when the brethren I would make
Hurry to the stars
Divine appointment
Checks with the teeth I am so disappointed
The Year of Sorrow, sowing tears
Neverending luminous light
The wicked man, yoking his peers
God’s anger burning bright
Partiality, still by wealth, as we judge by appearance
Lazarus peering down at us, from on high
Metaphysics’ mysterious disappearance
Morality’s abject conclusion, far from which we lie
Torso wrapped around brown baskets
Hunting grounds of rabbits burnt to a crispy potato and strawsack animal dog on a string
Never you mind whose side I’m on
That should be clear as a McDonald sign
Exorbitant amount of anything spiritual does not harm
Warthog shoulders beef on its snout can’t breathe but can help some more

O Holy God
O flowery descent
O wondrous flow of Sword-King’s blood
O,
GLORY GLORY GLORY GLORY GLORY GLORY GLORY

Death commands plain view of the stars
So fell the veil of reality
Between the marriage of Heaven and Earth
Penetrance Penetrance Penetrance!


I didn’t say half my problems were worse….

I didn’t say half my problems were worse since you ran away
Since you snatched the thoughts of matter and breath to yesterday
Fallen and faded elastic rooms gone to gray
A woman in the gloom by the curtains in a red and milk pink dress embalmed in dusk and shade
Music latter days dewy film might trade
Chatter in the room to encompass ere the loom
Lullabies, recite or sing Claire De Lune
Here and then rediscover the soul pageantry of the whole[]ole
But that’s not the sound of my past
It’s my brother’s
His a duckling hanging over his crib, or maybe by his infant side
Chiming sweet melody from a metal box to soothe him to sleep
My sound is the sound of whatever was fed me
I was a tiny monster
I was put to sleep
I put my face in anything
I bit the heel of the women who raised me
I was a voracious animal
I spun webs like a spider
I played faction against faction when it was fashionable
I was a miniature Machiavelli
I should have stroked my eyebrows
Only the keel of man tamed me
And I have no regrets
I am a better person now
I saw the darkness of my heart from an early age
And I knew that something had to be done for it
So I turned to God
—My God, my Lord, and my Saviour—
And I bear witness to his change in me today
Still I was not without youthful folly
I was snakeskin Mohawk dog-harlot barley
Maywind boomworld (that’s dubstep) Ricochet Harvey
I arrived, fresh on scene, knowing nothing of this place but Matt’s shorty sweatpants
Now we’re trampling through the miserable woods and night like odd’s Holly
Karamarkovich winter sandwich is for me I’m out of it
Trekking up the spine to Dolliver House, hey what’s up, [uh, I’m speeding] how are you?
Enter the spawn of the gate of elevation
Sunglasses on, music blasting, stick your tongue out and mock the sun
The southward journey begins, keep your eyes on something keen
(Man that was weak stuff, later on the furniture sprouted polka dots and it was rough)
Bricks wiggle away and the sky is something so gaudy it’s for kids to touch and play with at the mall
The trees are torrential and I’m chasing the night away—I’m trying to hug it, that’s all
The darkness is vast and deep yet so shallow and shaft-thin I could peel it with a stencil knife
I was with everybody, now I’m with nobody, except with someone I barely know
Cross-section:
Lanterns engulf the night
Along the path
Which leads to the same place you started
No revelations, no regrets, just tears, sweaty-pearl tears, it’s all so Godly beautiful
The moment serves a purpose
And stretches wide like a pouch
You carry the moment around
And fill it up as you go along
Conversations are a must
And the laughter in the air is golden
Understanding is everything
But understanding is just plain foolish
Webster’s in the corner saying, “Transcend the bullshit”
Craig is nodding; how right he was
Seeking the preternatural we go out in search of new experiences
But always, always, we end up with You
Listen to the waters! That divine rush of sound!
It is indescribable!
It is like being high on ice!
It is like being candid for the first time!
You would think we would see Buddha descending from the clouds,
Mounted on a lotus leaf, wearing naught but a shroud
He would say, (Forthcoming piece of dialogue)
Smoking like cowboys beneath archways that cast shadows in font slants
Then unearthly lights that seem to shine through your guts shine on you and it’s security you guys! Scram!
Bounding over the hills, belly-flopping into the ditch, wading through the muddy waters, out into the reeds—this is no country for old men, our backs to the flashlights—she steps into the mud, and backs away—score 1 for the bourgeoisie!
They never find us, and we slowly make our way back to campus—
After 3 hours of waiting in the grass, WITHOUT smoking weed, and Tom Clancying the scene like regular scouts
Moments later we’re under the lecture center, and security is passing us by—“Having a nice night?” “Yeah, if it weren’t for some kids.” “Sorry!”
Such is the cosmos
A Zoroastrian struggle
They are the sweepers
We are the tree swingers
Swinging overhead
Laughing with our hands to our mouths
“We got ‘em again!” we say
Those were eminently great times, I say
But that was the Night
Night will get dragged before Day
And though you were still with me,
O my sweet Cherie,
When I left from the Rock for my year at another school,
That was the year,
Sad annual when,
My shadow queen,
You ran away….

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10 Years Ago


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Re: 2 surrealist verses I wrote--hope you like. Let me know what you think

9 Years Ago


Intense. Beautiful and delicate. Harsh and surreal/real. It took me to a strange, yet familiar dream - thanks for sharing!