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This is the first book in the Weapons Company Gunners Trilogy. I've been nudged by a few to bring it back to the Cafe, so I am. It's in it's final stage so if you notice any grammar or punctuation issues, let me know specifically please. Be advised though: It's as real to life as I can make it and it's not romantic in the least.