Collaborater's Anonymous Forum Hollow

I started writing this one day and got stuck after two lines.  Any one like to help me out?

'These hollow apparitions leer ominously, foreboding in their wake.
They say not, do not, move not, refusing to give or take.'

These hollow apparitions leer ominously, foreboding in their wake.
They say not, do not, move not, refusing to give or take

A friend expressed that Canadian Geese were essentially Buddhists

I  wondered why they could swim so gracefully through rough trees

then I discovered that perhaps it was a simple matter of perspective

 

A stretched necks silence against moonlit water�s edge swanning grace

without a ripple beyond their breast or silt cyclones beyond the eye.

Move they do with currents or against currents current past perception

they give in manners only half seen and take in half light, that of

something deemed far beyond their vocal cry a hush an ugly hush.

 Sabinus has it

this is turning out pretty cool..you want that I should post it and transfer it to the main page?

any suggestions on that are appreciated.

i'm a fan : ) it's not really mine anymore but i still say yes because i like it

yay! I love to see people sharing words in such an open and giving way!!!! WOnderful things happen. . .

I must take time to reflect on this and put it into one spot and post it.