Creative Writing Period 11 : Forum : Lyric poem


Lyric poem

2 Years Ago


She likes songs about drifters,  Books about the same. She’s the giggle at the funeral, She can’t help it, she was born sick.   Her thoughts are loud, She can’t hear her mouth. Her hearts expired, She gives it away.   No one ever told her, People do not see through the very minimum. Perhaps if they had, She would’ve felt a little less insane.  

Re: Lyric poem

2 Years Ago


Good job!!! I like how you were talking about a girl, and not just towards everyone ya feel

Re: Lyric poem

2 Years Ago


this is beautiful like peter huedephol