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So yeah my character Nia who has yet to appear in Tower of God is being a --- well you know to keep my language clean I won't say what is ACTUALLY in my head. But lets just leave it at she's being difficult! *Sigh* She needs to make up her mind I've restarted this chapter like 3 times -.- 

#WriterProblems

Maybe I should just use Silvester's P.O.V instead :/

But yeah i totes agree... I'm pretty sure that's PROB the issue. I feel like I'm doing stuff backwards. i keep editing chapter 1 and now I'm gonna be writing a prologue AND chapter 2 LOL

And omg I can't do that. Chapter outline stuff. I tried it once and it was just too restrictive for me. Having it on paper just seemed too final and deviating from it slightly messed with my head LOL. So it ended up being more of a hindereance than an actual like help for me. And I feel like it made my writing worse. Now on the other hand I plan my WORLDS out to like the nanometer. I can rant about the worlds they're in for AGES. My siblings always get annoyed cause I won't stop for like an hour lol. I love my friend Nicole though she puts up with it and actually seems thoroughly engrossed in whatever whacked out scheme I come up with lol. I can always count on her not going "SHUT UP ALREADY!!!" But yeah, when I write my chapter outlines in my head and considering these things get thought about like 24/7 when I'm focusing on my stories (you know its really bad when I start dreaming about them) my basic outlines get kinda ingrained in my head lol.

Oh. Inspiration~. That's how I'll change Marc's part! hue. Dreams. Heh. Oh this'll be fun~ I should probably edit chapter two's AN, to be all like "yo peeps go check out chap 1 again.. tons of small edits that are actually really important and if you don't pay attention to them well you might get confused later on"

Other than that... gah, need more hours in the day to revise and update my books!~ D: If only sleep wasn't necessary.  Between 2 jobs, racewalking, my friends and the guy I'm seeing I have almost no time to update!

I've also gotten really helpful reviews lately that will definitely be taken into account in my revisions/new chapter versions, yay!

Hope you're all doing well! *runs for more tea*

Tea sounds good. I needa drink something to wake up my voice

It totes doesnt help that I'm a fairly expressive person in general soooo everything I do is like 10x the normal like demonstration lol

Prologue             The room was dark except for the faint glow of embers in the fireplace. Winnely sat up in the bed and bit her lip, her ginger hair hanging over her freckled face like a shroud. A cold breeze lightly caressed her exposed shoulder and she looked up momentarily to see that a window had been left open over night. She shivered. The white sheets bunched around her closed fists and to any onlooker it would be obvious that she felt guilty about something. Last night… she thought, did I … ?             Phantom touches and gentle kisses plagued her mind. Memories of the night before. A dazzling smile. Stomach knotting pleasure. A sensation born from within her body that she’d craved like a drug. That she still craved. Her ultimate regret. Marc. It all came back to her and she chanced a glance to her right. Marc. It was true then, the warmth she’d felt beside her wasn’t a dream. It hadn’t vanished with the start of the new day. Oh my -- I can’t -- forgive me -- Marc. She choked back a sob, a traitorous tear trailing down her cheek. Oh god.             It meant nothing.             It never did with him.