For All Those Teenage Writers : Forum : Like This Plot????


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Like This Plot????

8 Years Ago


A teen named alice dracolynn ventures off into forbidden territory, only to find a towering archway, made out of a crystal that is cool to the touch. when she and her sister venture through this archway, they are transported to a different world. alices sister is missing when she awakens, and she sets of to find her. along with the help of a fox girl, an angel, and an overly powerful dog boy, she sets out to find her sister and uncover the dangerous plot of an evil group called the youko.
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8 Years Ago


Sounds interesting and adventurous--I like it.  It seems like the kind of plot I would think up.
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8 Years Ago


Whoa, too furry. I'd make the characters a bit more human. You know, so readers can relate. Or something like that. Otherwise, I think it sounds a bit generic. Plots involving girls named Alice being transported to other worlds aren't that scarce.
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8 Years Ago


It sounds cool, but you'll have to make sure you fit a couple of plot twists in to stop it being to generic. Sounds great though :)