Help For Amateurs
Amateurs are welcome to either make writing or post a draft or two onto the group's forum for help, whether it's grammar issues, how to word out this event, or getting a more realistic feel. Note that we will not help you out at EVERYTHING: we don't do the story for you; you write the story, you share it to us whether it's good or bad, then you get help, then you use our help to re-write the story.
Again, we will not help you out at EVERYTHING. Don't ask repetitively about your story one chapter at a time: make the whole story, then post it all at once. Just some advice if you want better advice.