How to write a book Forum Help

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I'm not sure, but I think you can switch the point of view to another character. That would do the trick, I guess.

Thanks. Its just I have a book im writing and everyone says the big main things happen way too fast. I want to add another subplot into the story to slow down the big stuff from happening too fast. If that makes since

How do you guys stay on track when writing a book?
This is a huge issue for me. I'll write a little bit of my book and then forget about it for a few days. Then I'll come back and the 'writing flow' I had just slows down.

Well, it's good if you make yourself write every day, at least a paragraph just to keep the habit. It helps you get used to writing your book constantly, so you'll "get a grip" of it and start writing more easily in the future.

I just try to keep up with it. I write out an entire outline first and I also try to write just one book at a time. Hope it helps

I tend to have issues with...sticking with one idea. Writing is my only outlet, so sometimes my mood just doesn't fit the story I am working with and I have so many more in my head that I just...start something new. Is that a good thing? Whenever I do that, I just start to forget about other things, and they just fade into the background of my harddrive.... I don't really know if it is good or bad, to let ideas float away and lose the inspiration for them without getting anywhere with them. It bothers me a little bit sometimes. And other times, things won't fade away completely. I will go back to them months later, and I will read it over and just think to myself "what the hell is this??" and rewrite it completely anyway. Any thoughts?

I do the samething. but i write an outline first

I am honestly incapable of writing an outline first. It screws me up.

Well it doesnt have to be a permanent outline. Something you just have as a guide line

Sub plots should usually run parallel (or if your really clever in opposition) to your main theme. Theme being slightly separate from your actual storyline.For example: My plot is about a woman hiding her magical ability. The theme is freewill. My sub plot is a sideline where the main character believes her friend to be wrong in his choices - but to force him would be to take away his freewill.It creates friction.Without subplot a story can be too simplistic. In anyone's life there is never just one thing going on. They have friends and family with their own lives happening in conjunction with their own.

That is good advice.  Details are important.  I am writing a book that I think may have too much detail, though.  But since the plot sort of...loops (that is not the word) I tend to err on he side of excessive detail to provoke contrast with the minute differences that may/may not take place as the story moves.  I would love it if anyone in this group could take a look at my first four chapters and offer feedback.  It is called REDEEMING THE TIME