I'll Review You, If You Review Me Forum I am writing a book need revie..

i am currently writing a book called WHO AM I? it's basically a huge book of the collections of poems that relate to me and my life but in a humorous light felt and sometimes dark way i am currently moving around past poems like Sticks And Stones and Stand Proud and editing it into this book and another book that i am going to make anyway long story short i am making a book and i need some feedback and some ideas on it! so please if you can just take some time and look at it please! i would really appriecate it!