I'm Under 18 Years Old, I'm A Writer, And I'm Proud. Forum Please someone review my work!

All constructive criticism is welcome, I've added the first 13 chapters chapters of a book I've been writing to the site, I just really want a review. I don't even mind if you don't read a full chapter! Please! I'm sixteen and like writing literary suspense books, would one day like to write a good psychological thriller, and also write poetry. Thanks, Nooglepop 13 :-)